"one who yields to the temptation of ignoring the prose captions is probably better off."
That's just crazy talk, man. I mean, there may be a COUPLE of discriptions that are over the top, but to suggest that it might be a good idea to skip 'em all, that's just nuts. There's a lot of great writing in those captions, and most of the prose is incredibly beautiful, esp in Book III. Other than that, I REALLY enjoyed the thoughtfullness of this article. Nice work!
I'm glad you enjoyed the post. One on the Gaiman-Buckingham treatment is scheduled for October 26.
I overstated things a bit with the line about ignoring the prose captions, but I truly cannot stand Moore's efforts at descriptive prose--they strike me as ridiculously purple. They mar his otherwise strong work on Miracleman and Swamp Thing. I've found the only exception is when he's writing the captions in a specific character's voice; that finely tuned ear of his kicks in and takes over, and they read extraordinarily well.
If you like his abstract prose, great; to each their own--his editors at DC reportedly used to read it aloud in the hallways whenever a new script arrived in the office. I just can't help but grit my teeth at it.
I wasn't cribbing from any Fiore review from The Comics Jounral. As far as I know, he's never even reviewed Miracleman. The quote by him, as indicated at the top of my review, is from The New Comics.
I think you are reading some panels correctly, For instance the leopard that you mentioned was not "shot" but mauled to pieces by Miracle-dog. That juxtaposes, I suppose death and life(love-making of MM and Liz). Sure, alan's writing was not as polished as it was in Watchmen but it sure feels good to read his raw early writing. I don't think his similes and purple narration are somethings to put down too.They are great to read. Esp in a comics book.
I'm sorry about the wait in posting your comment. I wanted to double check the scene where the jaguar is killed in Book Two. You're right; the animal was mauled, not shot. I've made a correction in the review.
As far as Moore's purple prose goes, well, as I responded to Pete Dratt, to each their own.
Great article. . .except for this part here:
ReplyDelete"one who yields to the temptation of ignoring the prose captions is probably better off."
That's just crazy talk, man. I mean, there may be a COUPLE of discriptions that are over the top, but to suggest that it might be a good idea to skip 'em all, that's just nuts. There's a lot of great writing in those captions, and most of the prose is incredibly beautiful, esp in Book III. Other than that, I REALLY enjoyed the thoughtfullness of this article. Nice work!
I'm glad you enjoyed the post. One on the Gaiman-Buckingham treatment is scheduled for October 26.
ReplyDeleteI overstated things a bit with the line about ignoring the prose captions, but I truly cannot stand Moore's efforts at descriptive prose--they strike me as ridiculously purple. They mar his otherwise strong work on Miracleman and Swamp Thing. I've found the only exception is when he's writing the captions in a specific character's voice; that finely tuned ear of his kicks in and takes over, and they read extraordinarily well.
If you like his abstract prose, great; to each their own--his editors at DC reportedly used to read it aloud in the hallways whenever a new script arrived in the office. I just can't help but grit my teeth at it.
You were obviously as impressed as I was by Bob Fiore's review in TCJ, but I think you crib a bit too much from it ...
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I wasn't cribbing from any Fiore review from The Comics Jounral. As far as I know, he's never even reviewed Miracleman. The quote by him, as indicated at the top of my review, is from The New Comics.
ReplyDeleteI think you are reading some panels correctly, For instance the leopard that you mentioned was not "shot" but mauled to pieces by Miracle-dog. That juxtaposes, I suppose death and life(love-making of MM and Liz). Sure, alan's writing was not as polished as it was in Watchmen but it sure feels good to read his raw early writing. I don't think his similes and purple narration are somethings to put down too.They are great to read. Esp in a comics book.
ReplyDeleteI'm sorry about the wait in posting your comment. I wanted to double check the scene where the jaguar is killed in Book Two. You're right; the animal was mauled, not shot. I've made a correction in the review.
ReplyDeleteAs far as Moore's purple prose goes, well, as I responded to Pete Dratt, to each their own.